its pretty good. if you listen to the alien track there is a call and response from the instruments as if having a conversation. i would not say they are interrupting each other. I think it would help if you had some chords or something to fill space and be a solid foundation. the alien track has the guitar strums in the back the whole time. also there is a lot of reverb in the alien tracks which gives it the ambient vibes and gives it a lot of space. so i would explore reverb. just dont go to overboard with it. your has some reverb but overall feels pretty dry. but just remember to keep having fun with it. :)

the drop is a little lacking. i would try putting some detuned saws in the background.
Also put a sub cause got to have that bass if ya know what im sayin.
good overall layout off the song. just put the saw waves in the background. just use like a sine wave for the sub. and this track will be bangin bro.

Really pretty and the colors are also really good

it is sooooo kuwaiiiiiiiiiiiii : )

im so jelly. i wish i could draw. i love your art style.